Hi, I wanted to share my lets play because I have quite a bit of feedback. I think the game looks and plays fairly well but the lack of story and narrative cohesion is not doing it any favours, it feels unfinished that way but I think it only needs a few small fixes to remedy that.
So if you like, you can watch me talking at length about some tips or you can ask me some questions here on itch, I am happy to give some further feedback if needed (and wanted) :)
Hi, thank you so much for playing and for sharing such detailed feedback in your video! I watched it, and I really appreciate the time you took to go through everything. I agree that the story could be stronger, and I’ll definitely take your tips to heart as I work to make the narrative more cohesive. If you’re interested, I’d love for you to try out another game I made Named Train to hell. I kind of spoiled the ending in it but managed to put together an okay story overall. Your thoughts would be super helpful! And yes my name is Naashit :)
This was fun! I loved the twist. It's got a very intriguing premise and I really like how refreshingly jarring the ending is, I was expected a lot of puzzles and dealing with the protag's disbelief. I really appreciated how abrupt the encounter is. Wonderfully done!! I'm excited to see what you're up to next!!
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the twist and found the ending refreshing. It was definitely a goal to catch players off guard and create a memorable, abrupt encounter. I appreciate your thoughts on the pacing, and I’m excited to share what’s next—stay tuned for more surprises!
Hey! I noticed your game seems to be inspired by 'The Entity,' a game I made. It looks really well done, and I'm flattered by the similarities. However, it would have been nice to receive a mention or a shoutout. Best of luck with your project!
Thank you so much for the kind words! I really appreciate your support. Your game was a big inspiration for me, and I’d be happy to give you a shout-out. Your work has truly motivated me, and it means a lot to hear this from you!
I see the vision. I think this is pretty decent considering that you made it in 72 hours. I think this would be a very fun game if you came back to it in the future and added more to it! Although it was short, I enjoyed the gameplay. I wish there was more buildup to the end, though. Overall, good job!
Im kinda new to pixel art and increasing the player speed kinda made it ugly thanks to my pixel art skills, thats y i decided with less speed… :( anyways thanks for playing!
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Hi, I wanted to share my lets play because I have quite a bit of feedback. I think the game looks and plays fairly well but the lack of story and narrative cohesion is not doing it any favours, it feels unfinished that way but I think it only needs a few small fixes to remedy that.
So if you like, you can watch me talking at length about some tips or you can ask me some questions here on itch, I am happy to give some further feedback if needed (and wanted) :)
Hi, thank you so much for playing and for sharing such detailed feedback in your video! I watched it, and I really appreciate the time you took to go through everything. I agree that the story could be stronger, and I’ll definitely take your tips to heart as I work to make the narrative more cohesive. If you’re interested, I’d love for you to try out another game I made Named Train to hell. I kind of spoiled the ending in it but managed to put together an okay story overall. Your thoughts would be super helpful! And yes my name is Naashit :)
Hey, that sound of coming out of BATIM scared me!
This was fun! I loved the twist. It's got a very intriguing premise and I really like how refreshingly jarring the ending is, I was expected a lot of puzzles and dealing with the protag's disbelief. I really appreciated how abrupt the encounter is. Wonderfully done!! I'm excited to see what you're up to next!!
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the twist and found the ending refreshing. It was definitely a goal to catch players off guard and create a memorable, abrupt encounter. I appreciate your thoughts on the pacing, and I’m excited to share what’s next—stay tuned for more surprises!
Hey! I noticed your game seems to be inspired by 'The Entity,' a game I made. It looks really well done, and I'm flattered by the similarities. However, it would have been nice to receive a mention or a shoutout. Best of luck with your project!
Thank you so much for the kind words! I really appreciate your support. Your game was a big inspiration for me, and I’d be happy to give you a shout-out. Your work has truly motivated me, and it means a lot to hear this from you!
I see the vision. I think this is pretty decent considering that you made it in 72 hours. I think this would be a very fun game if you came back to it in the future and added more to it! Although it was short, I enjoyed the gameplay. I wish there was more buildup to the end, though. Overall, good job!
Thanks for the feedback man it helps me a lot in my work and thanks for playing!
Yeah, IDK, kinda uneventful. Also very laggy. Would be better if the player character could move faster.
Im kinda new to pixel art and increasing the player speed kinda made it ugly thanks to my pixel art skills, thats y i decided with less speed… :( anyways thanks for playing!